I want to focus on, in revising my story is the narrator, how he is in the beginning and at the beginning of scenes was pretty hard to do, I don't even know if I should do that. I set it up so that his voice is on the right side of the screen and I don't even know is that is legal in the writing world. I want it to just make sense all together. The last 3 paragraphs I wrote I don't know what I am doing with them so like they might not be the same or in the same place. A question that was generated while I was making my story are: Is there a different way to write with second person other than saying 'you' 'your' 'yourself' all the time.
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