I have been trying to revise my story but I can't put what I and everyone wants into words, or even where to put it in my story. I am trying to add things about my brother and our relationship but I can't find a way to incorporate it in my story; right now I just have in the beginning and honestly really don't like it. I also added a paragraph at the end trying to finish it stronger but the more I write I feel like the story is getting weaker. I felt good about my first draft, I know I need to still edit it more but my second draft I think is pretty bad... A question that I have still is, how can I make my story better by adding things about my brother and the ending? I can't seem to do :(
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I have been trying to think about why I am actually scared of aliens, who they represent to me, etc. I couldn't really come up with anything that I would like to admit to myself.
A question that I have is 'Do I have to have falling actions?' I like having the ending be my brother's wise words and answering the question. I am happy of the idea of my story I want to fix how it is like 75% aliens and only 25% of my relationship with my brother. I want it to be 50-50 but I am having trouble to do that. |
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