I want to focus on, in revising my story is the narrator, how he is in the beginning and at the beginning of scenes was pretty hard to do, I don't even know if I should do that. I set it up so that his voice is on the right side of the screen and I don't even know is that is legal in the writing world. I want it to just make sense all together. The last 3 paragraphs I wrote I don't know what I am doing with them so like they might not be the same or in the same place. A question that was generated while I was making my story are: Is there a different way to write with second person other than saying 'you' 'your' 'yourself' all the time.
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I had the most trouble was at the beginning when I was trying to make a character, trying to develop someone off the top of your head and have consistent emotions and feels. So filling out that paper of our character was helpful. I am also going to have trouble with writing second person, I want some more tips on that.
I want my digital story to have an eerie kind of feel, but also have the good moments like with me and my brother. I can get that scary feeling with weird music and scary alien pictures. Using like intriguing words that makes you want to still listen. I can also do that with pacing being slower when I talk about aliens.
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